IISZ 2018 Challenge #1 - Cut Up Folktale
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    Challenge #1 - Cut Up Folktale can be found here.
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    Challenge #3 - Utterly Mistaken can be found here.
    Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run can be found here.
    Challenge #5 - Queen's Dreams can be found here.
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        [Image: RabenHerrfurth_BrothersRavens.jpg]
        Illustration for Seven Ravens by Oskar Herrfurth


From Our Queen's Official Proclamation:

"I, Queen Sofia, the Ruling Monarch of the Sovereign State of IIcelandia, the Norway of the North,
do hereby proclaim the beginning of IIce Station Zebra."


And as Officious Adviser to Her Grandiloquence, the Queen of IIcelandia, Head Chief Executive Head of
IIce Conspiracy Enterprises, and speaking for the other members of our management team* as well, let me say:  


    Hi.


IIce Station Zebra Challenge #1:
Write a poem, prose-poem, or prose piece using The Seven Ravens text
and the below version of the cut-up technique:

You can write and post as many as you want. Why not one prose and one poem?

Guidelines:

1. Use at least 25 words, though it can be as long as you want.

2. The entire piece is to be constructed from segments of three words or longer
    taken from the text of The Seven Ravens.

    Example of segments in bold. They must consist of at least three consecutive words:

    There was once a man who had seven sons, and still he had
    no daughter, however much he wished for one.  At length his
    wife again gave him hope of a child, and when it came into
    the world it was a girl.  The joy was great, but the child was
    sickly and small, and had to be privately baptized on account of
    its weakness.  

3. Segments can be used more than once.

4. Gender, tense, and plurality may be changed:
    "father sent the boys to the spring"
Can be changed to:
    "mother sends the girl to the spring."

5. You may add or take out punctuation marks and any of these words:
    the, a, an, and, or, but, yet, to, so, for

6. If you run into a frustrating problem, you can cheat.
    (But remember: The gods are watching.)


Another Oskar Herrfurth illustration for The Seven Ravens:

        [Image: RabenHerrfurth_Stars.jpg]

All six illustrations can be found here.

The Seven Ravens. text for Challenge 1:
The Seven Ravens
Taken from Children's and Household Tales, a collection of folktales collected
and first published in 1812 by the Grimm brothers, Jacob and Wilhelm.


There was once a man who had seven sons, and still he had
no daughter, however much he wished for one.  At length his
wife again gave him hope of a child, and when it came into
the world it was a girl.  The joy was great, but the child was
sickly and small, and had to be privately baptized on account of
its weakness.  The father sent one of the boys in haste to the
spring to fetch water for the baptism.  The other six went with
him, and as each of them wanted to be first to fill it, the jug
fell into the well.  There they stood and did not know what to do,
and none of them dared to go home.  As they still did not return,
the father grew impatient, and said, they have certainly forgotten
it while playing some game, the wicked boys.  He became afraid that
the girl would have to die without being baptized, and in his
anger cried, I wish the boys were all turned into ravens.  Hardly
was the word spoken before he heard a whirring of wings over his
head, looked up and saw seven coal-black ravens flying away.

The parents could not withdraw the curse, and however sad they
were at the loss of their seven sons, they still to some extent
comforted themselves with their dear little daughter, who soon
grew strong and every day became more beautiful.  For a long time
she did not know that she had had brothers, for her parents were
careful not to mention them before her, but one day she
accidentally heard some people saying of herself, that the girl was
certainly beautiful, but that in reality she was to blame for the
misfortune which had befallen her seven brothers.  Then she was much
troubled, and went to her father and mother and asked if it was
true that she had had brothers, and what had become of them.  The
parents now dared keep the secret no longer, but said that what
had befallen her brothers was the will of heaven, and that her
birth had only been the innocent cause.  But the maiden took it to
heart daily, and thought she must save her brothers.  She had no
rest or peace until she set out secretly, and went forth into the
wide world to search for her brothers and set them free, let it
cost what it might.  She took nothing with her but a little ring
belonging to her parents as a keepsake, a loaf of bread against
hunger, a little pitcher of water against thirst, and a little
chair as a provision against weariness.

And now she went continually onwards, far, far to the very end of
the world.  Then she came to the sun, but it was too hot and
terrible, and devoured little children.  Hastily she ran away, and
ran to the moon, but it was far too cold, and also awful and
malicious, and when it saw the child, it said, I smell, I smell
the flesh of men.  At this she ran swiftly away, and came to the
stars, which were kind and good to her, and each of them sat on its
own particular little chair.  But the morning star arose, and gave
her the drumstick of a chicken, and said, if you have not that
drumstick you can not open the glass mountain, and in the glass
mountain are your brothers.

The maiden took the drumstick, wrapped it carefully in a cloth,
and went onwards again until she came to the glass mountain.  The
door was shut, and she thought she would take out the drumstick.
But when she undid the cloth, it was empty, and she had lost the
good star's present.  What was she now to do.  She wished to rescue
her brothers, and had no key to the glass mountain.  The good
sister took a knife, cut off one of her little fingers, put it in
the door, and succeeded in opening it.  When she had gone inside, a
little dwarf came to meet her, who said, my child, what are you
looking for.  I am looking for my brothers, the seven ravens, she
replied.  The dwarf said, the lord ravens are not at home, but if
you will wait here until they come, step in.  Thereupon the little
dwarf carried the ravens' dinner in, on seven little plates, and
in seven little glasses, and the little sister ate a morsel from
each plate, and from each little glass she took a sip, but in the
last little glass she dropped the ring which she had brought away
with her.

Suddenly she heard a whirring of wings and a rushing through
the air, and then the little dwarf said, now the lord ravens are
flying home.  Then they came, and wanted to eat and drink, and
looked for their little plates and glasses.  Then said one after
the other, who has eaten something from my plate.  Who has drunk
out of my little glass.  It was a human mouth.  And when the
seventh came to the bottom of the glass, the ring rolled against
his mouth.  Then he looked at it, and saw that it was a ring
belonging to his father and mother, and said, God grant that our
sister may be here, and then we shall be free.  When the maiden,
who was standing behind the door watching, heard that wish,
she came forth, and on this all the ravens were restored to their
human form again.  And they embraced and kissed each other,
and went joyfully home.

END

More on the Cut-Up Technique:
The Wikipedia article on the cut-up technique can be found here.

And:

What is the Cut-Up Method? by Ken Hollings, BBC Radio
http://www.bbc.com/news/magazine-33254672

Generations of writers, artists and comedians have made new works by mashing together old works.
It can be a beautiful thing, writes Ken Hollings:

I can still recall the strange thrill I felt as a teenager coming across a paperback copy of William
Burroughs's The Soft Machine hidden amongst the comic books and men's magazines in a corner
shop spinner.

This was nothing, however, compared with the excitement of encountering in its pages not a novel
but a vivid literary hallucination, shocking and confrontational in its approach to language. Words
had been edited into weird new juxtapositions - sentences, paragraphs and whole pages cut up into
flickering images.

As an experimental technique, the cut-up method as applied by William Burroughs in his work from
the late 1950s onwards, already had a rich history. In fact, art in the age of mechanical reproduction
would have been unthinkable without it.

The cutting together of pre-existing material into radical juxtapositions closely followed the development
of a mass culture that had been busily recording itself in photography, newsprint, sound and moving
pictures since the start of the 20th Century.

In 1920, Tristan Tzara, one of the Dadaist movement's founders, published a short poem that advised
the reader to cut out the words from a newspaper article and pull them at random from a bag - the
result would make you "a writer of infinite originality and charming sensibility".

Photography and print contributed to the political photomontages of John Heartfield and Hannah Hoch,
both of whom were involved in Berlin Dada. The biting satire of their imagery, by turns raw, aggressive
and sophisticated, gave hints of what was to come.

The cutting together of pre-existing material into radical juxtapositions closely followed the development
of a mass culture that had been busily recording itself in photography, newsprint, sound and moving
pictures since the start of the 20th Century.

In 1920, Tristan Tzara, one of the Dadaist movement's founders, published a short poem that advised
the reader to cut out the words from a newspaper article and pull them at random from a bag - the result
would make you "a writer of infinite originality and charming sensibility".

Photography and print contributed to the political photomontages of John Heartfield and Hannah Hoch,
both of whom were involved in Berlin Dada. The biting satire of their imagery, by turns raw, aggressive
and sophisticated, gave hints of what was to come.

Cut to: English artist Brion Gysin in his room at the notorious Beat Hotel in Paris cutting picture mounts
atop a pile of old newspapers. Along the axis of each cut, the layers of sliced text formed themselves
into sequences of randomly juxtaposed words whose jumbled meaning had him laughing out loud.

Busily lashing together his breakthrough novel Naked Lunch in the room below, William Burroughs realised
the potential of Gysin's discovery. Applying the cut-up method to his own typescripts, he produced novels
that threw meaning back upon itself, scrambling the habitual organisation of words and images. The cut-up
became a more violent expression of the editing process - a breakthrough that looked forward to the point
at which text, sound and image are no longer separated from each other.

During the 1960s, thanks to the electronic revolution in mass communications, this happened at an
accelerating pace. Burroughs and Gysin, together with an early computer and sound recording expert Ian
Sommerville, experimented with how tape recorders and cameras can recombine words and images.

One outcome was The Third Mind, a collection of essays and collages dealing with the practical applications
of the cut-up to cultural and political change. Another was Cut Ups, an experimental short film made in 1966
by Burroughs and Gysin in collaboration with director Antony Balch who ran a couple of "adults-only" cinemas
in London.

The soundtrack comprises a small selection of recorded phrases, read by Burroughs and Gysin and repeated
in different combinations, while the actual footage has been chopped into a random sequence of actions and
scenes. According to Gysin, one cinema in Oxford Street stopped showing Cut Ups because so many customers
were leaving their belongings behind in their haste to walk out.

Around the same time that Cut Ups opened, Burroughs wrote of hearing a tape of cut-up news broadcasts called
The Drunken Newscaster and "laughing until I fell out of a chair". With a little patience and a lot of practice it was
possible to rearrange the words of a broadcast media item to convey a completely different message from the
one intended.

Editing techniques could involve either splicing magnetic tape with a razor blade or using the pause button on a
machine to create a smooth transition from one word to another, thereby making people say whatever you wanted
them to. "Reagan Speaks for Himself", assembled in the early 1980s by Doug Kahn from interviews given by the
then president of the US, gives the impression of a Hollywood actor struggling with a script.

Easy access to twin cassette decks and home computers in the late 1980s meant that the reworking of words,
sounds and images was open to anyone. Artists such as Vicky Bennett (aka People Like Us) in the UK and
Negativland in the US became adept at altering films, phone-ins and talk shows to offer surprising readings of
media events.

Meanwhile, British satirists Armando Iannucci and Chris Morris helped reorganise how people consumed broadcast
news with groundbreaking shows like On The Hour, which offered biting parodies of current affairs coverage, and
Blue Jam, a nightmare of the small hours seemingly intent upon unravelling the entire fabric of radio culture.

The cut-up's more deliberately comic applications have brought the method to a far wider audience than the earlier,
more random experiments of the literary avant-garde.

At the same time the proliferation of digital platforms has narrowed the divide between the two. The video cut-ups of
artist Lenka Clayton and media satirist Cassetteboy make use of different processes but share the same unsettling effect.

Clayton took every word of George W Bush's 2002 State of the Union address and rearranged them into strict alphabetical
order. Her resultant film, Qaeda, Quality, Question, Quickly, Quickly, Quiet, plays dispassionately with the statistical
frequency of certain terms, such as "America" and "terrorism", in what has become known as Bush's "Axis of Evil" speech.

Meanwhile Cassetteboy has trawled through transcripts of David Cameron's speeches at Conservative party conferences
to transform his speeches into a foul-mouthed gangsta rap. Both films represent remarkable technical achievements
while at the same time reducing our leading politicians to the status of yammering ventriloquist dummies.

Society, from the Dadaists onwards, seems to get the cut-ups it deserves.

END
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There will be 8 challenges. The first challenge will be posted Wed Jan 10
with 7 more posted every 3 days i.e. Jan 10, 13, 16, 19, 22, 25, 28, and 31.



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#2
SEVENsonSAND
                                  
                               HADNodaugTHER
           
                          WITHOutbeingBAPTIZED            TURNEdintoRAVENS

           SHEDidnotKNOW

                                             FORAlongTIME 
                                       
                                    MORNIngstarAROSE




                     in the              e...
                   glass mo-       fr-
                    untain           ll be
                       to-            sha-      
                   ok a knife,  we
                 cut off her fin-
                 ger dropped 
                the ring,  cried
                 I wish  I wish
                  hea-      and
                  rd t-       they
                  hat        emb-
                  wish      raced.
     
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches
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#3
the daughter

her birth had only been the innocent cause.
he was careful,
she was to blame.
while playing some game
the father grew wings over his head.
i smell the flesh,
bread against hunger.

it was a human mouth.
she was at a loss,
took a knife,
let it cost what it might,
and cut off
his coal-black ravens.

set him free,
we shall be free.
what was she looking for?
the innocent cause,
water against thirst.
the little pitcher, it was empty,
and she had lost.
...
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#4
It was a human mouth,
awful and malicious,
and devoured little children.
When It saw the child, It said
"I smell, I smell the flesh of men."

Then they came, her seven brothers,
and wanted to eat and drink.
The wicked boys took a knife,
cut off her little fingers,
and wrapped them carefully in a cloth.

But when she undid the cloth it was empty.
On seven little plates, her little fingers.
In seven little glasses, water against thirst.
They ate a morsel from each plate,
and from each little glass they took a sip.

She had no rest or peace. She was to blame.
The parents dared to keep the secret,
they embraced and kissed each other,
and went joyfully home.
"Let it cost what it might, we shall be free."
The Soufflé isn’t the soufflé; the soufflé is the recipe. --Clara 
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#5
Far Too Cold

When it came into the world,
a secret no longer
in the glass mountain,

far, far 
to the very end
of the world,

she accidentally heard
some people saying
she was to blame

for the misfortune,
and did not know 
what to do.

She ran swiftly away,
and in her anger cried
coal-black ravens.

They still did not return,
none of them dared,
comfort themselves

with the word spoken,
the whirring of wings,
and devoured little children.

The flesh of men,
awful and malicious,
the very end of the world.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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#6
Awful and Malicious



While playing some game
the wicked boys—
seven coal-black ravens—
went continually onwards
and devoured little children,
flesh of men.

The parents could not
withdraw the curse
however much they wished.

God grant that
all the ravens
have no key to the glass mountain
over our heads:
end of the world.
feedback award Non-practicing atheist
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#7
Restored to Her Human Form Again

There was once a man who had his wife again, his wife again, his wife again, but it was too hot and terrible, and still he had no hope of a child. Some people said, “She was to blame for the misfortune.”

Then she was much troubled and went to her father and mother, and dared keep the secret no longer. The maiden took the drumstick of a chicken, wrapped it carefully in a cloth, but when she undid the cloth, it was empty.

The parents could not comfort themselves that there was once a man, at length was sickly and small, a little dwarf that came. They had no rest or peace until one day he went inside but the maiden took a knife and cut off his little finger. Some people said, “I smell the flesh of men.”

She went continually onwards, and for a long time grew strong, and did not know that she was certainly beautiful—bread against hunger, water against thirst, and a provision against weariness.

She set out the wide world to search.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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#8
The Raven Maiden

The innocent cause
was standing behind the door.
When she had gone inside,
a little dwarf came to meet her.

The girl was certainly beautiful,
they embraced and kissed each other
wanted to eat
she undid the cloth
belonging to his father.

She had lost
the flesh of men
and had to be privately
rolled against his drumstick,
now she went continually,
she went continually.
" you can not open the glass mountain"
the little dwarf came to meet her
he looked at it
and saw that it was a ring
and on this, had gone inside.
She came forth
a whirring of wings,
a rushing through the air.

What was she now?
one of her little fingers
came to the bottom.
The dwarf said
"put it in, put it in"
but it was too hot
and terrible.

She dropped the little dwarf
there they stood
and did not know what to do
each of them ran swiftly away.

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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#9
Bread Against Hunger

a whirring of wings 
and the wicked boys
came into the world

their human form
sickly and small
grew impatient and
devoured little children

bread against hunger,
a morsel from 
the flesh of men

bread against hunger,
a morsel from
the will of heaven

awful and malicious 

none of them dare to go home
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#10
6 And the good sister went onwards again, and she came unto the glass mountain.a
7 The door was shut.
8 And she wished to rescue her brothers, and had no key to the glass mountain.
9 And [suddenly] she heard a whirring of wings, and a rushing through the air.b
[They came, the seven ravens, her seven brothers.]c
11 And they wanted to eat and drink, and looked for their little plates and glasses.
12 And a little dwarf came to meet her, and took a knife.
13 Now the good sister went continually onwards.
14 She came to the sun, and devoured little children.
15 She ran to the moon, and said, I smell, I smell, the flesh of men.
16 Thereupon the little dwarf carried the ravens' dinner in:
17 on seven little plates he carried it, and in seven little glasses.d
18 And in the last little glass he dropped the ring, which the good sister had brought away with her.e


1 And when the seventh came to the bottom of the glass, the ring rolled against his mouth.
2 It was a human mouth.
3 Then he looked at it, and saw that it belonged to his father and mother, and said,
4 God grant that our sister may be here:
5 and then we shall be free.


a - Some manuscripts have “to” instead of “unto”.
b - The best manuscripts lack “suddenly”.
c - The best manuscripts lack this verse entirely.
d - The best manuscripts have “he carried it”, though the majority of texts lack it.
e - Some manuscripts place verses 16-18 before verses 13-15. Other manuscripts omit verses 13-15 entirely: see preceding poems.
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#11
The Lord Ravens Are Not At Home

My child, what are you looking for,
behind the door watching?
I am looking for my brothers—
they have certainly forgotten me

while playing some game.

The door was shut. I accidentally
heard some people saying
what had befallen my brothers
was the will of heaven:
the sun was too hot and terrible,
and devoured little children.

My parents were careful not to mention
I was to blame,
their dear little daughter;
birth had only been the innocent cause.

The moon is too cold—
awful and malicious.

Cut off one of my little fingers,
put it in the door;
keep the secret no longer.

I smell, I smell the flesh of men!
I hear a whirring of wings
and a rushing through the air—
the lord ravens are flying home.
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#12
(01-12-2018, 04:10 AM)Todd Wrote:  Restored to Her Human Form Again

There was once a man who had his wife again, his wife again, his wife again, but it was too hot and terrible, and still he had no hope of a child.

The parents could not comfort themselves that there was once a man, at length was sickly and small, a little dwarf that came. They had no rest or peace until one day he went inside but the maiden took a knife and cut off his little finger. Some people said, “I smell the flesh of men.”

Quote:Keith wrote:

She had lost
the flesh of men
and had to be privately
rolled against his drumstick,
now she went continually,
she went continually.

What was she now?
one of her little fingers
came to the bottom.
The dwarf said
"put it in, put it in"
but it was too hot
and terrible.

Awesome. Hysterical Hysterical Hysterical

I also enjoy corrupting children's literature. Wink

Thanks for the laughs, guys. Thumbsup
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#13



                          < what are you looking for? >

                                the word spoken
                                the will of heaven
                                the wide world

                                are all turned

                                to the sun
                                to the moon
                                to the stars

                                to the spring

                                rushing through air

                                       - - -



    How luscious these writings are. All the different flavors, gradations, implications...
    it's amazing how the simple words of a folktale can be woven into such varied garments.
    You might expect shirts, pants, socks, and undies; but stovepipe hats, sequined costumes,
    Kevlar vests, and raven's cloaks are another matter entirely.
   
    I forgot to mention that the idea for using the cut-up technique, as well as using a folktale,
    was lizzie's. I'm was so enamored of the idea, that I was all for doing two of them -- which
    is what's going to happen. Challenge #6 will be in honor of William S. Burroughs, easily the
    most famous practitioner of this technique. And fittingly, the text for it will come from a
    chapter in one of his novels. From folktales to drugs-and-depravity… can delicious food be
    made from the latter? I suspect it will be enjoyable child's play for cooks such as yourselves.

                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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#14
end of the world


to the sun
to the moon
to the stars , I am looking
and saw that they wanted to kiss each other
they embraced and went forth
into the very end
restored to their whirring of wings
through the air, a rushing through
now the Lord set them free
there's always a better reason to love
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#15
At Married-a-Vegan Men's Club



Each of them sat, ate a cold morsel
and also the drumstick of a chicken

took a knife
a loaf of bread
a little pitcher of cold water

took a sip

and devoured a whirring of wings
on seven little plates
behind the door
and said,

"CHICKEN!
My brothers,
the mountains
are yours!"
there's always a better reason to love
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#16
"married-a-vegan men´s club"
Smile the title is gold,
and stuck throughout this surreal poem.. here i am, wondering about chickens again : )
or maybe roosters.
...
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