For Ella
#1
Walking on thin ice
nothing is
everything might be
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#2
Big Grin ain't no such thing as solid ground.
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#3
might be nothing is everything Smile

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How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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#4
well said......... Big Grin
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#5
hi sj, ella's always on thin ice, she likes it that way.
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#6
and then to think I made a serious haiku attempt Sad  oh well
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#7
It's a sound poem even though we're babbling. Walking on thin ice is a cliche, you might think of a new way to say it, but the whole of it is thought provoking. Smile
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#8
o.k.

will think about another line
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