02-24-2016, 04:48 AM
TTUIF
Lounge! Lounge! Lounge!
Thank The Universe it's Friday!
Shabbat shalom!
God is dead!
Lounge! Lounge! Lounge!
Thank The Universe it's Friday!
Shabbat shalom!
God is dead!
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TTUIF
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02-24-2016, 05:11 AM
(02-24-2016, 04:48 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: TTUIF  Yes, so many love Friday night for so many reasons. I especially liked L3/4 together. 
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02-25-2016, 05:38 PM
Bless our souls -- one hell of a laugh from this one! Yes, the last two lines are perfect (if unworthy of Perfection, haha).
02-26-2016, 11:47 AM
Glad you guys enjoyed it. I thought "Cafeteria Atheists" was too much for a title. I'll use it somewhere else.
Partly inspired by Nietzsche's "The Parable of the Madman". I'll post a link in case anyone might enjoy reading it. Thanks, Paul http://www.age-of-the-sage.org/philosoph...uotes.html 
03-01-2016, 03:18 PM
(02-29-2016, 01:09 PM)srijantje Wrote: goyee oneThanks as always for reading S. I don't know how I feel about this one anymore. I thought the sarcasm and irony was thick enough to stand, but I read it to a close friend tonight who also only part 'got it'. So on the one hand, I think I nailed it and on the other, I think it failed. What I won't do is add 30 more words to connect the dots. I'll settle for 3 or 4 if I can find them.  It's going in the hmmm box for now. Paul |
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