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Peer Pressure
Weeded Offline
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#1
12-18-2015, 11:55 AM
"Are you ready?"
Beads of sweat reply.
Rewind...
"I can't do this... I can't-"
"Shut the FUCK up, damn."
"I can do this, I can do this..."
Fast-forward.
Crack!
"No, no, no!"
Plop.
Crack! Crack! Crack!
Plop.
Fast-forward...
"This week's story involves two young men..."
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#2
12-18-2015, 02:43 PM
Made me think of two guys base jumping....or just jumping....crack crack crack would be their crashing into the trees...but plop?
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#3
12-18-2015, 04:01 PM
forced shitting Huh
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#4
12-18-2015, 04:04 PM
Lol wut
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#5
12-18-2015, 04:22 PM
it was the plop that sold me Big Grin
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#6
12-18-2015, 04:31 PM
Doh Big Grin
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#7
12-18-2015, 08:43 PM
plop the body dropping
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#8
12-18-2015, 10:14 PM
Or poo poo, according to Billy lmao
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