It seems to be a very nice idea.
someone's daughter, the refrain after the phrase.
all the notebook flew,
but the pencils remain,
teacher's daughter.
rhyme sounds nice?
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These are quite wonderful. The recurrent theme maintains its symmetry throughout.
What a great idea for the 'turn'. Sexy little poems in more ways than one.
her passion
comes in words -
poet's daughter
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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Fun!
she liked to be
corked tightly -
the vintner's daughter
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(11-13-2015, 04:24 PM)rayheinrich Wrote: These are quite wonderful. The recurrent theme maintains its symmetry throughout.
What a great idea for the 'turn'. Sexy little poems in more ways than one. 
her passion
comes in words -
poet's daughter
Agreed.
she liked tight ropes
and did the splits-
acrobats's daughter
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I absolutely LOVE this idea!
i'm introduced to her
venus fly trap --
florist's daughter
I personally prefer "tulips" over Venus fly trap. The latter makes it feel too science-y. I don't particularly enjoy science.