Three Seasons

[Cyferz]

Autumn breeze and sunset tease
Orange tones and broken leaves
Whitest white as fallen snow
Winter sleeps and nothing grows
Chriping birds and children's play
Spring sunrise and brand new days



At the top of every page: "GIVE FEEDBACK BEFORE POSTING A POEM IN ANY OF THE WORKSHOPS". Yours, again, is missing. /mod
*cry cry* okay I did it :3
As you can't seem to understand that giving thoughtful critique to others is more of a benefit to you than to the site you may be better suited to a different site. Best of luck to you. /mod

[Unaccoutable ignorance]

Autumn breeze and sunset tease
Orange tones and broken leaves <-- what image are you trying paint with orange tone?
Whitest white as fallen snow <--- whitest white seem redundant, and stands odd since all your other lines are an noun followed by a verb
Winter sleeps and nothing grows
Chriping birds and children's play
Spring sunrise and brand new days <--- the sunrise linking back to the sunset was nice

The message of cycle of life is portrayed clearly, I really like how the beginning and ending resonant. However, maybe change the nothing grows line and children's play, because it wasn't very poetic? I think? and a touch of punctuation would be nice