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[RonFoReezy]

Hey everybody, I just joined the forum I'm finding it kind of hard to navigate. This is the only place I could find a "post thread" button. So anyway i'll start with a shorty. This is a poem I wrote a few years ago and it means a lot to me. I've never been critiqued because I don't think I'm any good and I'm embarrassed to show friends and family. Here goes...

Why won't the bird share it's wings?
A son asks his mother.
Why do people do bad things?
She could not answer one or the other.

                     

[rowens]

Maybe you could add something to it. It's easy to answer those questions, as simple as they're stated, but you could ask the same questions, with something added, and it might make the simple questions not as simple as they seem. And fix the its/it's thing.