01-03-2015, 11:44 AM
(12-28-2014, 12:02 PM)amiwrite Wrote:(09-21-2014, 10:37 PM)Tamara Wrote: this is just not working for me. anyone has some good suggestions?
etched on the moon
behind the clouds
my listless wandering
honestly I do not understand the meaning, or rather what you are trying to convey. I understand that there is something etched onto the moon (which stands behind clouds) but I do not see how these three lines tie in together. My suggestion would be to rewrite this, with specifically the moon in mind.
Read the Erthona post directly above yours.
all this useless beauty... but what the hell, why not?