04-15-2014, 02:14 AM
un-ku
Dancing Squirrel
scorching asphalt
heavy traffic
acorns ahead
Dancing Squirrel
scorching asphalt
heavy traffic
acorns ahead
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Dancing Squirrel
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04-15-2014, 08:11 AM
You sure you don't mean acorn's ahead?
As in: acorn are ahead. I just spent the weekend with a white rapper extraordinaire. And acorns is ahead is the new black, twenty years agowa!. 
04-15-2014, 08:36 AM
Like rolling papers....zig-zag
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
04-15-2014, 08:40 AM
Rolling papers? We got digital mums to be rollin for us, huh?
04-15-2014, 09:05 AM
(04-15-2014, 02:14 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote: un-ku Excellent Chris, I go nuts for Dancing Squirrels Mark  wae aye man ye radgie
04-15-2014, 09:08 AM
The last time I read a poem by this name it was deleted. So I'm confused.
Or maybe I'm just remembering something, and it's not what I remember. If so, never mind. 
04-15-2014, 04:14 PM
You captured some of the "angst" I feel when seeing such a thing. We have squirrels all over the city. The choice of words to convey the full picture.
seeya. JG 
04-15-2014, 06:15 PM
(04-15-2014, 08:11 AM)rowens Wrote: You sure you don't mean acorn's ahead? I was going for something analogous to a road sign like 'traffic ahead' or 'stop sign ahead, etc. (04-15-2014, 09:05 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote:(04-15-2014, 02:14 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote: un-ku Ha ha.. Thanks Mark. I don't even brake for them anymore. That is usually what takes them out. (04-15-2014, 09:08 AM)rowens Wrote: The last time I read a poem by this name it was deleted. So I'm confused. Yes, a few of us were filling in the white space for a deleted poem called 'the Dancing Squirrel.'
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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