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for long times have i written for, bit over a decade. my styles a bit off of paradigmes with real schemes.
As long as it's hard to read but still makes sense to me. it's a bit hit and miss.

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#2
Hit or miss seems O.K. Most of what you write is better than the stuff in the Newly Registered Forum that makes sense.
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Cheers, I appreciate it. I'm still learning a lot of what goes down around these forums.
Got me wondering what the diff between iambic and dactyls are among just learning they exist ish
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(01-23-2014, 07:30 AM)Asyndetoff Wrote:  Cheers, I appreciate it. I'm still learning a lot of what goes down around these forums.
Got me wondering what the diff between iambic and dactyls are among just learning they exist ish

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