The Meaning of Dreams

[heslopian]

I had a dream
last night that I could talk to cats.

The room was dim,
shadows of light through dirty office blinds.

I leaned down close to the pussycat's face,
it unhinged its furry jaw, and spake':
"Sweet shit, do you need a boyfriend."

[Todd]

Ha Ha Ha

The ending caught me by surprise. I know we don't need to give editing suggestions here, Jack.

But here goes:

L4: You could cut "only admitting"

(loved it unhinged its furry jaw)

Maybe, though it might be too cute, put a strophe break after spake.

Fun stuff, Jack.

[ellajam]

Profound. This really dropped it's last line well. Thanks for posting it, good morming

[heslopian]

Thank you both for your kind comments I'll use both of your suggestions now, Todd!