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robins (haiku)

robins (haiku)
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#1
10-31-2013, 05:09 PM
dusk
two Robins ~
arguing
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10-31-2013, 06:47 PM
Nice image in this true-Ku!
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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#3
11-02-2013, 10:38 PM
(10-31-2013, 06:47 PM)ChristopherSea Wrote:  Nice image in this true-Ku!

Thanks Chris, much appreciated. Even the fact of you saying true-Ku is compliment in itself. I've been writing 17 syllable three line poems for 15 years thinking they were Haiku and I very much doubt that even just 1 of them was a Haiku. But I may of seen the light, but I'm also waiting for haiku to make it's next move and prove me wrong.
Cheers for the comment.
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#4
12-05-2013, 12:26 PM
i enjoyed this. thank you for showing me a real haiku. For the robins charging and swooping too!
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12-10-2013, 09:34 PM
(12-05-2013, 12:26 PM)gilmored Wrote:  i enjoyed this. thank you for showing me a real haiku. For the robins charging and swooping too!

thank you for the kind comments, much appreciated.
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