TruthfulLies
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I wanted to try an acrostic so here it is
Fragile yet strong in a way only it can be
Rather confusing yet easy to feel
In time it can change
Either into more or less
Never staying exactly the same
Depending on its patrons opinions and goals
Some decide to avoid it completely
However there are those who need it more than anything
In this bond many trust
Put into a single word, it is friendship
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oops, you missed the N out
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(08-08-2013, 10:52 AM)billy Wrote: oops, you missed the N out
I thought it was a poem about a fried ship!!!
Now it makes sense. Thanks billy.
TruthfulLies
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(08-08-2013, 10:52 AM)billy Wrote: oops, you missed the N out
thanks for pointing that out, ill have to fix that real quick, have no idea how I didnt notice it while I was writing
(08-08-2013, 11:00 AM)milo Wrote: (08-08-2013, 10:52 AM)billy Wrote: oops, you missed the N out
I thought it was a poem about a fried ship!!! Now it makes sense. Thanks billy.
It is now fixed
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(08-08-2013, 10:49 AM)TruthfulLies Wrote: I wanted to try an acrostic so here it is
Fragile yet strong in a way only it can be
Rather confusing yet easy to feel
In time it can change
Either into more or less
Never staying exactly the same
Depending on its patrons opinions and goals
Some decide to avoid it completely
However there are those who need it more than anything
In this bond many trust
Put into a single word, it is friendship
well, I had no idea what an acrostic poem was, imagine my embaressment (I never know how to spell that word) after I had looked it up!
My problem with it is that there was no punctuation, I'm sure that's allowed and everything, it's just that it made me read it a la monotone, I did like the descriptiveness of it all though.
I'm not a friendship avoider, they just all avoid me. ;o)
