07-21-2012, 01:16 PM
Thanks guys 
Indeed fairytales are pretty overdone
... it'll probably be a different poem if I take it out though, so I suppose I just have to work things out and keep it as non-grating as possible.

Indeed fairytales are pretty overdone
... it'll probably be a different poem if I take it out though, so I suppose I just have to work things out and keep it as non-grating as possible.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
