07-20-2012, 01:35 AM
(07-16-2012, 07:49 PM)Paddygirl Wrote: Grey shadows fall and seep through seams
Morphing threads of mundane life
Becoming complex patterned dreams Lovely image!
By weaving trailing webs of strife
And from these fragile, fractured streams
No meed or recompense be bought I thought meed meant the same thing as recompense?
As darkness covers days last gleam
Invoking astral planes so fraught
Substance seeks a hallowed haven
In which to gain some sweet reprieve
Clash of will ‘tween dove and raven
And caverns echo cry's of grief
A coffin-weight of worry grows
And thus portends with sagging dread
When everywhere an ill-wind blows
On veins of deconstructed web Love this image!
Feelings stripped and harshly flayed
With chords of tension holding taut
Solace cloaked in darkening spray
Where true will can, and must, be sought
To deviate from one’s true course
Will take from where the answers lie
Bravely face opposing force
For mystic birds of peace to fly
Rest is claimed with this now ending
Amidst brilliant, shimm’ring glow
Unveiling mists from light transcending
Revealing higher realms on show
A soul is salved in darkened hour
Once-fractured thoughts, restored
Free from chaotic evil’s scour Chaotic evil is a bit D&D sounding.
To journey back on silver chord
I love all the imagery and word usage. Unsure on what some of it means, but still good : P

