Astral Projection in Nightmares

[Paddygirl]

Leanne, the lines you fixed for me had 7 syllables, I aimed for 8 in each line, when you get a chance can you explain this to me if poss. after your coffee obviously

Remember to count stresses or beats, not syllables. You have four beats (4 feet) per line.

SHAdows | MIST and | SEEP through | SEAMS
trochee | trochee | trochee | trochee

MORPHED in | THREADS of | MUNdane | LIFE
trochee | trochee | trochee | trochee

beCOMing | COMPlex | PATTerned | DREAMS
amphibrach| trochee | trochee | trochee

to WEAVE these | TRAILing | WEBS of | STRIFE
amphibrach | trochee | trochee | trochee

ah yes, it is coming back to me now! I was reviewing some of the notes that are posted in the Novice section but when reading through, I end up confusing myself by mixing up details...thank you