About a Girl

[Timmycom]

remember her
her sad jaded guise -
faded laughter
dulled visage
fragile tears
a shade of someone
she could be
anyone

forever
behind smokey mirrors
she haunted empty spaces
all she had was impotent rage
and shards of glass

nobody knew her
she was unspoken
in blood she whispered
that she was broken by years
of being alone

couldn't bear her own reflection
tried to hide from herself
but to everyone else
invisible

she asked questions like
wouldn't it be easier to die
marked another notch in flesh
festered like an infected wound
full of pus and spite

underneath a bridge
bones taut beneath her skin
gaunt and desperate
desolate

isolated inside herself
intoxicated
drowned herself in noxious spirits

she had sleeping pills and opiates
which doctors prescribed

they found her huddled in a dark corner
greying skin blistered and swollen
she finally found company
in the form of little black flies
who swarm lovingly around her smile
her hollow eyes stare blankly
frozen

... This starts of with some kind of blank verse and then wriggles out of it, and then back in, and then out. I donno, I didn't like it that much to be honest. It was very blunt with it's "masculine rymes" that kinda cut too deep. But this really needs a more stable structure before I can start to enjoy it :\