Would that...

[billy]

If my memory formed a keen apex, what a good start, makes me think of "as sharp as a razor"
if a single pinhole revealed would 'or' or 'and work better at the start of this sentence?
my life as a constant slope toward
or angle away from i see where the angle works with apex and slope to extend the metaphor and like it, that said i think the 'or angle' is strong enough for it's own line while moving 'away from' down before 'that moment...'
that moment…
if, with a little pressure,
the rich color would seep out in bold lines, is 'the' needed?
I would write my history.

But there are no straight lines, not sure if straight s the same as bold
the points are jagged
and my history is a waxy childish smear
in calico brown. good image to end

i get a feeling you're telling us your life was shit i really like the ending.
thanks for the read. i almost forgot.....try a use a title. it adds to a poem and can be used to give the reader some kind of direction. it's one of the best tools you have to lead us on your merry dance.