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Friend or Foe
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07-16-2012, 10:53 AM
Looks pretty solid to me... it reads like a dream. The last stanza has some of my favorite lines ("lands devoured by nature's thief"). Thanks for the read
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Friend or Foe - by Paddygirl - 07-15-2012, 11:18 PM
RE: Friend or Foe - by Leanne - 07-16-2012, 04:30 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by Paddygirl - 07-16-2012, 06:34 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by penguin - 07-16-2012, 07:30 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by billy - 07-16-2012, 07:40 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by Paddygirl - 07-16-2012, 07:44 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by popeye - 07-16-2012, 08:00 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by Leanne - 07-16-2012, 08:18 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by Paddygirl - 07-16-2012, 08:43 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by billy - 07-16-2012, 10:27 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by Leanne - 07-16-2012, 08:50 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by addy - 07-16-2012, 10:53 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by Paddygirl - 07-16-2012, 12:22 PM
RE: Friend or Foe - by Leanne - 07-16-2012, 12:25 PM
RE: Friend or Foe - by Paddygirl - 07-16-2012, 12:42 PM
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