07-16-2012, 08:18 AM
S2 L3 should also be your b rhyme... but shhh... looks much better formatted and with those few changes.
You can do it however you like, but generally we try to post the edited version above the original so that people can see the changes that have been made... you don't have to, but if you would find it useful there's a tutorial on Poetry Revisions that shows you how.
You can do it however you like, but generally we try to post the edited version above the original so that people can see the changes that have been made... you don't have to, but if you would find it useful there's a tutorial on Poetry Revisions that shows you how.
It could be worse