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Friend or Foe
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07-16-2012, 07:30 AM
Hello Paddygirl. I like the last verse, the 5th line in particular, though 2nd and 4th ain't bad.
You could maybe say - The children splash - Where land's devoured Perhaps A sacrifice to nature's blight?
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.
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Friend or Foe - by Paddygirl - 07-15-2012, 11:18 PM
RE: Friend or Foe - by Leanne - 07-16-2012, 04:30 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by Paddygirl - 07-16-2012, 06:34 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by penguin - 07-16-2012, 07:30 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by billy - 07-16-2012, 07:40 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by Paddygirl - 07-16-2012, 07:44 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by popeye - 07-16-2012, 08:00 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by Leanne - 07-16-2012, 08:18 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by Paddygirl - 07-16-2012, 08:43 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by billy - 07-16-2012, 10:27 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by Leanne - 07-16-2012, 08:50 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by addy - 07-16-2012, 10:53 AM
RE: Friend or Foe - by Paddygirl - 07-16-2012, 12:22 PM
RE: Friend or Foe - by Leanne - 07-16-2012, 12:25 PM
RE: Friend or Foe - by Paddygirl - 07-16-2012, 12:42 PM
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