Dreams

[billy]

it has an elysian fields feel about it.

Dare not sleep
For to enter the realms of dreams unguided it helps sometimes not to be overtly obvious, ie; For to enter these realms unguided
The soul of the wanderer may be lost
Dreaming for eternity, even when awake
Oh, how I wish to wander through the age of dreams
To follow the footsteps of fate
To find a path
A path framed by fields of silver wheat
I know not where this path goes path, three times in three lines is too many paths
But where it ends
I must take care
Not to lose my soul
Or be driven mad
By days of night and nights of day
For this is a dream

i like the poem. it does need tightening up though, we can take from the title that's about dreams/dreaming so those words will probably not be needed in the body of the poem, unless it's vital, here, i don't think they are. the last line feels over the top. i'm wondering why dreams would make you feel mad, the thought adds a bit of ambiguity and make the reader think which is why i like that part.
thanks for the read.