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nicotine and the ways of the universe

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07-09-2012, 01:15 PM

(07-09-2012, 11:59 AM)billy Wrote: just the one suggestion, would 'where i ate'
work better than while i ate?

Thanks Billy, but I think the "where" would imply that I was sitting in the bushes. Hysterical

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nicotine and the ways of the universe - by Indie - 07-02-2012, 04:54 PM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by billy - 07-02-2012, 05:36 PM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by Indie - 07-02-2012, 08:30 PM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by penguin - 07-02-2012, 08:41 PM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by Indie - 07-03-2012, 10:43 AM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by billy - 07-03-2012, 10:59 AM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by addy - 07-03-2012, 02:06 PM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by Indie - 07-03-2012, 04:08 PM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by Erthona - 07-04-2012, 11:25 AM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by Indie - 07-05-2012, 05:50 AM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by billy - 07-05-2012, 03:42 PM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by Indie - 07-05-2012, 03:47 PM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by Indie - 07-08-2012, 08:32 PM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by penguin - 07-09-2012, 05:45 AM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by Indie - 07-09-2012, 06:35 AM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by penguin - 07-10-2012, 06:13 AM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by billy - 07-09-2012, 11:59 AM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by Indie - 07-09-2012, 01:15 PM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by billy - 07-09-2012, 05:41 PM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by addy - 07-10-2012, 11:41 AM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by Indie - 07-10-2012, 02:12 PM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by Timmycom - 07-13-2012, 11:45 PM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by Philatone - 07-14-2012, 03:56 AM

RE: nicotine and the ways of the universe - by Indie - 07-14-2012, 08:40 AM

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