07-09-2012, 05:45 AM
What is a bottle-o, by the way? And can you really but bourbon and coke in a can? I think, in that last verse you need "and a cigarette for me". I still think "straightened out the universe" would be better. It is ironic - people talk of this and that for several hours and feel better for it but nothing actuall;y changes.
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.