A Call
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Here o’ earth city
I call onto you
Forge your blades and burden with steel and light
So go forth brothers in arms
Go until your ghosts are within reach
Forth into the maw
We come from a shattered legacy
Born out of darkness
But into the light, I say
For in the light lies truth and reconciliation
And in the twilights lies remembrance
And in the dark lies nothing but darkness
Here in peril, we lie

One question which one sounds better?

And in the dark lies nothing but darkness
Or
And in the darkness lies nothing

Anyway, thanks.
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Messages In This Thread
A Call - by way2epic4me - 07-07-2012, 11:51 PM
RE: A Call - by billy - 07-08-2012, 08:25 AM
RE: A Call - by Erthona - 07-08-2012, 08:15 PM
RE: A Call - by Philatone - 07-09-2012, 08:30 AM
RE: A Call - by addy - 07-09-2012, 12:46 PM
RE: A Call - by Timmycom - 07-13-2012, 12:04 PM
RE: A Call - by Paddygirl - 07-16-2012, 12:38 PM



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