07-05-2012, 02:02 PM
(07-05-2012, 12:15 PM)billy Wrote: i agree, please people. yes dale, you in this instance are the "people," don't over do it, rewrite a line or two by all means if it's to show what you mean but leave the rewrites and edits to the poet.Yes, sorry. I did not note it was in mild also. Offensive material removed.
Dale
(07-05-2012, 05:50 AM)Indie Wrote: thank you Dale, but this is mild critique and regardless of your efforts, your rewrite is entirely inappropriate.So noted
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.