07-05-2012, 05:50 AM
thank you Dale, but this is mild critique and regardless of your efforts, your rewrite is entirely inappropriate.
"Poets are shameless with their experiences: they exploit them." - Friedrich Nietzsche
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nicotine and the ways of the universe
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