07-02-2012, 08:04 PM
Nice poem, Todd. I like these lines best
The miles form a metronome
of cell phone calls and shining chrome
I might change the punctuation in a few places, semi-colons instead of commas but I enjoted the rhythm and imagery.
Ray
The miles form a metronome
of cell phone calls and shining chrome
I might change the punctuation in a few places, semi-colons instead of commas but I enjoted the rhythm and imagery.
Ray
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.