07-01-2012, 05:06 PM
"It's a great poem"
I concur. It is difficult to use this form without it becoming overtly sing-song and hackneyed, if not outright Hallmarkish. You avoid all three, and the refrain is a nice turn on a common phrase.
Dale
I concur. It is difficult to use this form without it becoming overtly sing-song and hackneyed, if not outright Hallmarkish. You avoid all three, and the refrain is a nice turn on a common phrase.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.