The Poet's Dream
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I loved this....apart from the penultimate line, which is so bad I'm almost inclined to believe you made it so on purpose.
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.
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The Poet's Dream - by Leanne - 06-30-2012, 04:58 PM
RE: The Poet's Dream - by addy - 06-30-2012, 05:02 PM
RE: The Poet's Dream - by penguin - 07-01-2012, 05:57 AM
RE: The Poet's Dream - by Leanne - 07-01-2012, 06:23 AM
RE: The Poet's Dream - by popeye - 07-01-2012, 09:16 AM
RE: The Poet's Dream - by Erthona - 07-01-2012, 04:31 PM



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