The Cat What came to Dinner

The Cat What came to Dinner

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06-30-2012, 05:03 PM

I wonder if "like some great lump of lead" might not work better, to avoid some of that repetition?

lightning :p

Nice rhythm Dale, and good fun, reinforcing my belief in the absolute evil of cats.

It could be worse

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The Cat What came to Dinner - by Erthona - 06-30-2012, 12:03 PM

RE: The Cat What came to Dinner - by Philatone - 06-30-2012, 12:30 PM

RE: The Cat What came to Dinner - by Leanne - 06-30-2012, 05:03 PM

RE: The Cat What came to Dinner - by penguin - 07-01-2012, 05:46 AM

RE: The Cat What came to Dinner - by Erthona - 07-01-2012, 05:59 PM

RE: The Cat What came to Dinner - by billy - 07-01-2012, 06:12 PM

RE: The Cat What came to Dinner - by Erthona - 07-01-2012, 06:37 PM

RE: The Cat What came to Dinner - by billy - 07-01-2012, 06:50 PM

RE: The Cat What came to Dinner - by Erthona - 07-01-2012, 07:59 PM

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