06-30-2012, 07:23 AM
billy
-for now, i'm keeping the break as is on "into" to maintain the wordplay (to, two). will think about changing. hope to have addressed the "hold" bit. thanks for the help as always
penguin
- basing off of how I've been reading the piece (so my bias is strong), "hour" just comes out of me in two syllables, especially when read aloud. I know i can't account for everyone and for all situations when using this little devil of a word. for now i may keep as is, though you have helped me to see the line in a new respect. thanks for the time
-for now, i'm keeping the break as is on "into" to maintain the wordplay (to, two). will think about changing. hope to have addressed the "hold" bit. thanks for the help as always
penguin
- basing off of how I've been reading the piece (so my bias is strong), "hour" just comes out of me in two syllables, especially when read aloud. I know i can't account for everyone and for all situations when using this little devil of a word. for now i may keep as is, though you have helped me to see the line in a new respect. thanks for the time
Written only for you to consider.