daylight

[Philatone]

addy

thanks for the time and thoughts, and the words as well! they were incredibly positive

todd

thanks for the return! i'm working on the reinforce (i'll admit it was a word i wasn't fond of either there). I think "waning" and "lift" give a more natural edge to the scene, though perhaps those choices still aren't best?

ray

thanks for the critique! i'm hesitant to add something after "daylight" to break from the meter, but i'll take a look to see if i can justify it. thanks for the motor; agree that its sound is fitting. also tried to adress your comments on the miles part as well as the mature (and that last comma towards the end). helpful feedback all around; it's much appreciated