After Birth Delight
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Great read. The entire time there was this uneasy undercurrent (perfect for an uneasy subject matter), then bam! Those last two lines were just sublime.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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After Birth Delight - by tectak - 06-20-2012, 07:35 PM
RE: After Birth Delight - by addy - 06-21-2012, 05:42 AM
RE: After Birth Delight - by tectak - 06-21-2012, 11:39 PM
RE: After Birth Delight - by billy - 06-21-2012, 11:00 AM
RE: After Birth Delight - by billy - 06-21-2012, 05:13 PM



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