06-15-2012, 12:05 PM
Billy and Dale -
The feedback means a lot.
Could you offer some feedback in terms of grammatical fixes? (Billy)
and Dale, I appreciate your critiques. I'm not sure where I fit into the writing space. I write a lot like this. No rhythm or order, just what I feel like - I know no better since I have had no formal instruction, and I'm working on it. It seems "prose" is quite and ambiguous term. Are you saying this is more of a shot story and less of a poem? I guess this is where it gets very subjective, but I'm happy to be hearing your or anyone else's thoughts.
The feedback means a lot.
Could you offer some feedback in terms of grammatical fixes? (Billy)
and Dale, I appreciate your critiques. I'm not sure where I fit into the writing space. I write a lot like this. No rhythm or order, just what I feel like - I know no better since I have had no formal instruction, and I'm working on it. It seems "prose" is quite and ambiguous term. Are you saying this is more of a shot story and less of a poem? I guess this is where it gets very subjective, but I'm happy to be hearing your or anyone else's thoughts.