06-14-2012, 02:18 PM
Thanks Billy. I think you are correct on some of those suggestions, especially the repetition.
Yes, it is suppose to be dispassionate, almost bored, as this is the feeling those close to this person felt, and that is the overall feeling I wanted to convey.
Dale
Yes, it is suppose to be dispassionate, almost bored, as this is the feeling those close to this person felt, and that is the overall feeling I wanted to convey.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.