06-03-2012, 07:07 PM
Can I just say, that writing about these things seems to demand a very high level of skill, to match the mixture of bravery, sadness, and poignancy of the events themselves. I do not say you have failed, just that the bar is set very high, not least because the War Poets of the Great War made such a mark.
I might be inclined to cut it down a little.
I might be inclined to cut it down a little.