STAY AWHILE~
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Dost thy heels bear wings? Dost = does thou (sing)
Doth, or doeth, is probably the better choice as you are wanting to say, do your, not do you, so you are using it in a possessive sense, as well as a plural sense, as you are referring to "heels". Plus, stylistically "dost" seems to work better without a pronoun in most instances. Of course with all the overlapping usage there is no longer any set rule, but the ear still retains a sense if you grew up reading the KJV as I did (not by choice).

This is evidently
a plea to Mercury! Smile

"there is not much room for correction as there are no mistakes. "

Just because there are no mistakes doesn't mean it is good, and not needful of correction. "Mary had a little Lamb" needs no correcting, but it generally is not what one strives for in poetry.

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STAY AWHILE~ - by Arachne - 05-29-2012, 08:19 PM
RE: STAY AWHILE~ - by billy - 05-29-2012, 08:21 PM
RE: STAY AWHILE~ - by tectak - 05-30-2012, 12:56 AM
RE: STAY AWHILE~ - by Arachne - 05-30-2012, 02:08 AM
RE: STAY AWHILE~ - by Todd - 05-30-2012, 01:10 AM
RE: STAY AWHILE~ - by billy - 05-30-2012, 06:05 AM
RE: STAY AWHILE~ - by Arachne - 05-30-2012, 09:07 AM
RE: STAY AWHILE~ - by billy - 05-30-2012, 09:22 AM
RE: STAY AWHILE~ - by Arachne - 05-30-2012, 10:48 AM
RE: STAY AWHILE~ - by addy - 05-30-2012, 11:04 AM
RE: STAY AWHILE~ - by Erthona - 05-30-2012, 10:39 PM



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