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“So, The Wind Blows?”
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05-29-2012, 11:04 AM
So this is told more from a general POV, a personification of a specific sentiment? In that case, "I've been waiting my whole life" might have thrown me off as an opener; it kind of tricked me into reducing the context way too early.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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“So, The Wind Blows?” - by Erthona - 05-28-2012, 10:31 PM
RE: “So, The Wind Blows?” - by tectak - 05-29-2012, 04:55 AM
RE: “So, The Wind Blows?” - by Erthona - 05-29-2012, 07:51 AM
RE: “So, The Wind Blows?” - by addy - 05-29-2012, 11:04 AM
RE: “So, The Wind Blows?” - by billy - 05-29-2012, 12:05 PM
RE: “So, The Wind Blows?” - by Erthona - 05-29-2012, 01:55 PM
RE: “So, The Wind Blows?” - by billy - 05-31-2012, 08:15 AM
RE: “So, The Wind Blows?” - by Arachne - 05-29-2012, 08:37 PM
RE: “So, The Wind Blows?” - by Erthona - 05-30-2012, 08:45 AM
RE: “So, The Wind Blows?” - by Arachne - 05-31-2012, 07:05 AM
RE: “So, The Wind Blows?” - by Philatone - 05-30-2012, 12:28 PM
RE: “So, The Wind Blows?” - by Erthona - 05-30-2012, 08:35 PM
RE: “So, The Wind Blows?” - by Erthona - 05-31-2012, 05:29 PM
RE: “So, The Wind Blows?” - by tectak - 05-31-2012, 06:39 PM
RE: “So, The Wind Blows?” - by penguin - 05-31-2012, 08:21 PM
RE: “So, The Wind Blows?” - by Erthona - 05-31-2012, 08:22 PM
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