05-28-2012, 12:07 PM
Quote:I might edit this later, but it's too fresh to put metaphors and similes to right now...I appreciate the feed back, and will use it in the future and for future writes.
Love Is Not Enough
Losing you
is like a death
hard
to let go
of
the past
and
never agains
the future
and
never wills
I let you become
my everything
my world was
of your love
for me
you
were the air
I breathed
the water
I drank
the food
I ate
the shelter
I needed
I hate
how much
I love you
I can see
in your eyes
feel
in your embrace
the person
you long to be
and
it tricks me
into believing
that’s who you are
but you’re not
my hope
for you
is no longer
enough
to endure
the hurt
it’s become
too much
for my heart
to bear
the
resentment
that
resides inside
your words
will never
be enough
to override
your lack
of
actions
you failed
me
and now
you
must
go
Losing you
is like a death
hard
to let go
of
the past
and
never agains
the future
and
never wills
I let you become
my everything
my world was
of your love
for me
you
were the air
I breathed
the water
I drank
the food
I ate
the shelter
I needed
I hate
how much
I love you
I can see
in your eyes
feel
in your embrace
the person
you long to be
and
it tricks me
into believing
that’s who you are
but you’re not
my hope
for you
is no longer
enough
to endure
the hurt
it’s become
too much
for my heart
to bear
the
resentment
that
resides inside
your words
will never
be enough
to override
your lack
of
actions
you failed
me
and now
you
must
go


