05-26-2012, 06:46 AM
tec
valid points raised again. I thank you for your comments. I have adjusted the "snapped" line, and I think it keeps even more in tune with the 'photograph' imagery. I have to apologize, what was given before truly was a quick fix and didn't get my inspection as heavily as it should have. That being said, this later form is only here because it felt right to me, and was entirely deliberate.
agree with comments on the title as well; was something I was debating.
thanks again
valid points raised again. I thank you for your comments. I have adjusted the "snapped" line, and I think it keeps even more in tune with the 'photograph' imagery. I have to apologize, what was given before truly was a quick fix and didn't get my inspection as heavily as it should have. That being said, this later form is only here because it felt right to me, and was entirely deliberate.
agree with comments on the title as well; was something I was debating.
thanks again
Written only for you to consider.