05-25-2012, 12:46 PM
billy
thanks for calling out the shift of place in the opening; have no idea how that skirted by me. will address. I'll see what I can do to adjust the opening 3 lines. Thanks for the time
addy
similarly, thanks for reinforcing the comments on the opening. will make some changes. I'll also see what I can do about creating a break in the close; I agree completely. I appreciate your feedback
thanks for calling out the shift of place in the opening; have no idea how that skirted by me. will address. I'll see what I can do to adjust the opening 3 lines. Thanks for the time
addy
similarly, thanks for reinforcing the comments on the opening. will make some changes. I'll also see what I can do about creating a break in the close; I agree completely. I appreciate your feedback
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