05-23-2012, 11:58 AM
This is so sweet... I got a little misty-eyed there 
. I thought the ideas progressed beautifully, though stanza 4 loses a bit of steam around the middle part. The last stanza was such a great summation in its honest earnestness. Not a sophisticated piece but its hardly meant to be. Very enjoyable read
. I thought the ideas progressed beautifully, though stanza 4 loses a bit of steam around the middle part. The last stanza was such a great summation in its honest earnestness. Not a sophisticated piece but its hardly meant to be. Very enjoyable read
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?