05-22-2012, 03:20 PM
Personally I enjoyed it 
, and I liked the way you did your transitions. There's a deftness, but mostly short, sweet, and direct. Not a lot going on but imo there doesn't really need to be... of course, that gives us very little to actually workshop
, and I liked the way you did your transitions. There's a deftness, but mostly short, sweet, and direct. Not a lot going on but imo there doesn't really need to be... of course, that gives us very little to actually workshop
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?