(05-14-2012, 08:33 PM)tectak Wrote:seriously; leave it in the sewer or the pigs arse. it leads to situations where all we see is bollocks tacked on to other peoples responses. if you don't agree, you don't agree. show how you don't agree through a response to the poem.(05-14-2012, 07:19 PM)Indie Wrote: There is a lot of great imagery in here. Personally, I'd love to see this fleshed out into a more in depth poem or series of poemsBollocks.
and in my opinion. the following line is an image i could do without

I like shitting in my bathroom whilst looking at the rural view.
me so glad i didn't post that in ray red.....i just realised where we we are.
i agree, bollocks. i like...

