Clock Watching edit1
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"Her eyes were not aligned to see the sun. Did a double-take, because at first I thought she was perhaps cross-eyed. My mistake of course. With "alignment", i guess you are just trying to recall older methods of timekeeping, such as sundials, but maybe there's a way to clarify this line"

That's insightful addy, I had not thought of that.

Well, what of it Mister Mint, is this what you meant? Smile
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Clock Watching edit1 - by tectak - 05-11-2012, 07:25 AM
RE: Clock Watching - by Erthona - 05-11-2012, 09:38 AM
RE: Clock Watching - by heslopian - 05-11-2012, 09:52 AM
RE: Clock Watching - by addy - 05-11-2012, 11:09 AM
RE: Clock Watching - by billy - 05-11-2012, 12:00 PM
RE: Clock Watching edit1 - by Philatone - 05-12-2012, 06:16 AM
RE: Clock Watching edit1 - by Erthona - 05-14-2012, 08:37 AM
RE: Clock Watching edit1 - by billy - 05-14-2012, 01:17 PM
RE: Clock Watching edit1 - by tectak - 05-14-2012, 03:15 PM
RE: Clock Watching edit1 - by billy - 05-14-2012, 04:53 PM



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