Another Lull in the Storm:

Another Lull in the Storm:

Indie

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#10

05-08-2012, 08:39 PM

Wow, this is great. Tighter, sharper. Just a couple of nits, 'What The Fuck' should be 'What The Fuck?' and nonetheless is one word not three.

Indie Smile

and for some reason quote doesn't seem to be working for me :/

"Poets are shameless with their experiences: they exploit them." - Friedrich Nietzsche

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Another Lull in the Storm: - by billy - 01-21-2012, 11:11 PM

RE: Another Lull in the Storm: - by Erthona - 01-25-2012, 01:02 PM

RE: Another Lull in the Storm: - by billy - 02-01-2012, 01:22 AM

RE: Another Lull in the Storm: - by Indie - 05-05-2012, 09:25 AM

RE: Another Lull in the Storm: - by billy - 05-07-2012, 12:00 PM

RE: Another Lull in the Storm: - by Erthona - 05-07-2012, 03:11 PM

RE: Another Lull in the Storm: - by billy - 05-08-2012, 12:13 PM

RE: Another Lull in the Storm: - by Erthona - 05-08-2012, 02:12 PM

RE: Another Lull in the Storm: - by billy - 05-08-2012, 08:19 PM

RE: Another Lull in the Storm: - by Indie - 05-08-2012, 08:39 PM

RE: Another Lull in the Storm: - by billy - 05-09-2012, 11:23 AM

RE: Another Lull in the Storm: - by Indie - 05-09-2012, 11:28 AM

RE: Another Lull in the Storm: - by billy - 05-09-2012, 11:29 AM

RE: Another Lull in the Storm: - by Indie - 05-09-2012, 12:44 PM

RE: Another Lull in the Storm: - by billy - 05-10-2012, 10:38 AM

RE: Another Lull in the Storm: - by Philatone - 05-11-2012, 03:46 AM

RE: Another Lull in the Storm: - by billy - 05-11-2012, 11:20 AM

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