Memories of Ben

[Indie]

Hi Indie,

I enjoyed reading your work, but sadly I don't have much in the way of critique. I did notice that Pokemon was misspelled, though.

As far as the content I really found it to be warming and nicely worded. I did think a few non-essential words could be cut to clean up the piece.

Thanks for sharing.

Thank you Mark, I did think Pokemon didn't look right

Thanks for reading.