Superhero Dreams - Flash Fiction

[billy]

Broken glass landscape, shadows of humanity waiting to line pockets with pilfered treasures. Five-four, blonde, hidden in the voluminous folds of a hoodie, disenchanted with her derelict reality. Superhero dreams in form-fitting spandex, accentuating natural curves to perfection. Nemesis of filthy [would filth work better?]and corruption, abbreviated to P.I.G. the ass kissers of the hazy underworld lords. Innocence lost in the uniformity of apathy. Visions of lighting the world in truth and love, paints a rare smile on her downcast face. In a blinding flash let the landscape clear itself of syringes and sadness, dissolve the prison bars of safety, spray paint the walls with street art, a laboured love. Closed eyes bring euphoric imaginings of a new world that shatter with the sound of sirens as she wanders through a broken glass landscape, with dreams of saving her world from itself, if only humans could be superhero’s.

nice little vignette Indie. the hoodie dates it to modern and also gives it a feel of boredom, it's my favourite line. i love the P.I.G it connects to this place, though what does it stand for? the natural curves line has to be a prerequisite to any super hero thing. stan lee would love it. it has a black widow feel.

no nits really, i'm not able to, all i can say is; i found it to be something i'd like to see expandexed on