just a note:
by all means slate a pice of poetry if you think it deserves it. don't slate the poet. sounds silly i know.
If there is any point in technical criticism of this work I am afraid it is outside my ability. acceptable if a tad harsh, and it does criticise the poem.
why on earth would you think that anyone would wish to read it? you did
this is commenting on the poet which isn't criticism of the poem as such. most of us like straight forward when it comes to feedback, i doubt any of us including your good self relish personal feedback about our integrity or intent, (note this isn't in thread police red,)
chaotic; for now try posting in mild crit, it will be more beneficial in the long run/admin
by all means slate a pice of poetry if you think it deserves it. don't slate the poet. sounds silly i know.
If there is any point in technical criticism of this work I am afraid it is outside my ability. acceptable if a tad harsh, and it does criticise the poem.
why on earth would you think that anyone would wish to read it? you did
this is commenting on the poet which isn't criticism of the poem as such. most of us like straight forward when it comes to feedback, i doubt any of us including your good self relish personal feedback about our integrity or intent, (note this isn't in thread police red,)chaotic; for now try posting in mild crit, it will be more beneficial in the long run/admin